Blog #12

I think that our greatest strength in our script and what we are most proud of is the story line and the reality in our work.  The scene and the entire script reflect a real life situation that could happen to normal teenagers in high school.  The relatiblility keeps the readers interested in the plot and I think that is what will make our script very successful.  I think our script is good content wise but the structure of the script could definitely use work. We are new at the format of a script and some of the scrip has the specifications that are needed but a lot of it does not.  I think that we could have fixed all of these technical problems and made our script amazing. If we had the opportunity to rewrite the scene we definitely would have increased the detail in the descriptive parts of the scene.  The content of the dialogue was very good but the format could have used some work and I think that would have been the main focus of the rewrite.  These problems can luckily be fixed in revisions. :)